Style Sampler
There are/It is
There are a number of topics which could be touched upon in writing
about our First Amendment rights.
There is an increasing need in our society for changing the way we perceive
the elderly.
There will be 28 people taking this course.
There are two parts to this problem.
It is my recommendation that she be given a position here at EGS. (see
also “superfluous nominalization”)
In the White Bear School District there is a significant threat that has
been imposed as a result of decreased funding.
There are generally several people involved in the creation of these IEP’s.
It is a fact that sales have been dropping.
How often is there that confused, irritated, and frustrated customer on
the other end of the phone or letter?
Passive voice
The work was completed by John over three weeks ago.
Enclosed find questions, called Interrogatories, to be answered by you.
Our office has received notification from SSB that a purchase of shares
took place in the above client’s mutual fund account.
It is necessary to increase the monthly cost of Service Plus by $1 beginning
with your next bill.
“To be” constructions
Some problems that have been observed and reported on the survey were
that the shelves run out of books too quickly and the wait to pay for books
is too long.
Some of the special events I taped were my family reunion, my grandfather’s
birthday, and my cousin’s wedding.
Cheryl believes that there needs to be extra help during the beginning
of each semester. (see also “there is/it is”)
Clichés/businesese
Since time is of the essence in this matter, we would appreciate hearing
from you by April 15.
Please be advised that while we appreciate your prompt response to our
request, and your consideration in this matter, we are unable to process
your reassignment request due to the fact that the FOCUS message must come
from yourself (the manager).
Superfluous nominalization
The contractor has agreed to provide maintenance for the warehouse
for six months.
I conducted an analysis of the faulty circuit.
The Vice President asked me to provide justification for the purchase of
a new photocopier.
“Verbing” (see also “businessese)
Bottom-line it for me.
B group has been tasked with implementation of the new policy.
Sample ¶ (including there is/it is, to be, singular/plural agreement,
etc.)
The houses are mostly two stories with all stucco on the outside. There
are beautiful ferns, flower gardens and green foiliage everywhere. The
first floor typically has a large kitchen, dining room, living room, laundry
room and small bath. Most homes have a spiral rod [sic] iron staircase
to the second floor to a master suite with a Jacuzzi and large bath, and
three other good size bedrooms with another full bath. Most homes have
a large deck off the master suite that winds around the house to look over
the pool and ocean. All rooms have ceiling fans that circulate a beautiful
breeze off the ocean. There are maids that live in her own little house
behind each home. They cook all the meals, clean and do the gardening.